5.1.07

Part 2 !

Kevin CALLS NUMBER AFTER SCHOOL

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voice- hello, suppam county hospital, this is nurse beckam.

Kevin- uh.......i must have the wrong number, im looking for my GF

voice- what is her name, sir?

(Kevin gives info)

voice- yes, this is the right number, she is one of our patients here.

Kevin- realy? y? what happened??? how is she???

voice- her room number is ..646, in building A, suite 3.

Kevin- WHT HAPPENED??!!!!

voice- plz come by sir and you can see her, goodbye.

Kevin- WAIT! NO!

*dial tone*


Kevin GOES TO HOSPITAL, AND TO ROOM ..646, BUILDING A, SUITE 3. GIRL IS LYING IN THE HOSPITAL BED.

Kevin- omg are u ok??

Jennifer- ..................

Kevin- sweetie!! talk to me!!

Jennifer- i..........

Kevin- u what?? U WHAT???

Jennifer- i have cancer and im on life support

Kevin- .....................>breaks into tears<......................

Jennifer- they're taking me off 2night

Kevin- y??

Jennifer- i wanted 2 tell u but i couldnt

Kevin- y didnt u tell me????

Jennifer- i didnt want 2 hurt u.

Kevin- u could never hurt me

Jennifer- i just wanted 2 c if u felt bout me as the same i felt bout u.

Kevin- ?

Jennifer- i love u more than anything, i would give u the world in a heartbeat. i would die for you and take a bullet for you.

Kevin- ...........

Jennifer- dont be sad, i love u and i will always be here with u

Kevin- then why did u break up with me?

nurse- young man, visiting hours are over.

Kevin LEAVES, Jennifer IS TAKEN OFF LIFE SUPPORT, AND DIES

but what Kevin didn't know is that Jennifer only asked him those questions so she could hear him say it one last time, and she only broke up w/him because she knew she only had 3 more weeks to live, and thought it would cause him less pain and give him time to get over her before she died.

NEXT DAY

Kevin is found dead with a gun in his hand..with a note in the other...

THE NOTE SAID :

i told her i would take a bullet for her....
just like she said she would die for me...



-the end -

23 Comments:

At 1/05/2007, Blogger Honey™ said...

shotgun !!

oh my god that was really sad :(

and happy birthday dear :)

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger Omtantoo7 said...

waaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiii!! t3awer il galb!! mo gilna ma la da3i il nekad!! yalla alalh yer7amhom..

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger Dakhtour said...

wooow! what a sad end! men el 7ob ma qatal methel maygolon :P

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger MSB said...

memories of romeo & juliet rushing back... or is it titanic? la in titanic she lived in the end.

now is this a real story?!

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger الاء سعود المجيبل said...

waaaaay @@ 3aweraw galby ...!!!

thakerony fe film..." A Walk to Remember "

nafs elshay :(((

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger Utmost-y said...

abee wa7ed methlaaaaaa :(
bs ghabe shaku eymot?!!
i told u abe happy ending :(

Thanks 3al story it was fun to read:)

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger um-miT3ib said...

;/ !!!!!!!

ye'6a3 il 7eb shuu beZILLL ;p

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger Sever said...

It's a story one of my fear...

& it's a type of the story I had, but it finished in a good way, thanks God. I'm not alone now.

"Kevin- .....................>breaks into tears<......................"
Did not like this line actually.
Just did not like... :-/

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger do0da said...

me liked the way it ended specially the note, 3ad i was just listenin to I could for you by RHCP

 
At 1/05/2007, Blogger F said...

sakkait 3alay eb postatek el 7azena wainech ya um-mit3ib :P

i liked the story :)
more plz!

 
At 1/06/2007, Blogger um-miT3ib said...

kany zalabya shahda :P


and fee riyayeel chethe ? mathan

 
At 1/06/2007, Blogger Chai-7aleeb said...

Nice one :-)

 
At 1/07/2007, Blogger Honey™ said...

hi there ;)
tra you are tagged by me ;D

 
At 1/07/2007, Blogger Chica Bonita Q8 said...

the cancer part is what I predicted but didn't think Kevin would commit suicide ..

 
At 1/07/2007, Blogger Om Jaber said...

7asby allaaaah 3ala el3adooooo eshhalqe9a9??
bas tadry ga66a3tly galby, takhayalt ro7y fy halmawqef (allah laygoool) chaan met men el7ezen ma lah da3y ante7er :(

 
At 1/07/2007, Blogger Baskin™ said...

honey

thx alot

omtantoo7

b3d shswee el89aa ch.theee ;p


zizotime
eee wnta el9aaj ;p

msb

yes it is

q8ya

moshayf hl film mn gbl bs zeen gltee 3shan ashoofaa


utmost

lat7lmeen ;p hatha ensan mree*9 w*93eef eb3enee ;p and thx alot

um-mid3aab

i agree ;p

sever

oh thx god u are not alone and i hop every thing is perfect now :)

 
At 1/07/2007, Blogger Baskin™ said...

do0da

yeee the note part akthr shy *9yg 5lgee :S

zalabya

a*9b6j :P thx and ok :P

um-mit3ib

ohoo ee fee ryayeeel y7boon akthr mn chtheee bs mo *93af el sh59ya :) ok ohooo y7b bs elent7ar mo 7l 7g elmoshklaa elrjoola ena elwaa7d ywajh elmshakl maythrb mnhaaa :P ./clap for me :P

chai-7aleeb
thx :)

 
At 1/07/2007, Blogger Baskin™ said...

honey
ok thx dear i will make it soon :P

chica bonita q8

yeeE :P


omjaber

ala lay76 a7d ebhl mw8f enshala cuz its so hard and yes i agree with u malh da3eee el ent7ar l2na 7g el*93aaf :)

 
At 1/08/2007, Blogger Extinct Dodo said...

i think thats the most selfish thing anyone could have done @ the girl

even though shes terminally ill, what gave her the right to treat someone bad, just so that they can prove how much they love her?! im sorry, i think her actions were very love-less and self obsessed

ugh!!

 
At 1/09/2007, Blogger Omtantoo7 said...

time for a new story yalla yalla yaaaaalla!

 
At 1/09/2007, Blogger Missy said...

OMG *cries* :(

 
At 1/10/2007, Blogger Baskin™ said...

extinct_dodo
i agree with u :)

omtantoo7

enshala soon iwill post new story bs hl ayam emt7anat fklish ma3ndee wkt :S

missy
:(

 
At 1/10/2007, Blogger Omtantoo7 said...

weeeeee!! shmga3dek ihnee 3ayal?:P yala goom ahoo jedami idris ;p

 

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